I loved some of the descriptions like "Your lips go numb as the blood drains from your face and into your toes" and the line "Wishing it was you wrapped around her." You created a vivid picture of the end of a relationship. Well done.
It's not, but it definitely could be made into a longer piece. Tempting!!! It's so uncommon to find writing in 2nd POV so I just made it short for experimenting >.>
I loved some of the descriptions like "Your lips go numb as the blood drains from your face and into your toes" and the line "Wishing it was you wrapped around her." You created a vivid picture of the end of a relationship. Well done.
Thank you so much. I appreciate you reading and for this amazing comment :)
A moment all too familiar. Heart breaking.
So so so heartbreaking! <3
A beautifully captured moment of a world-shattering emotion!
Thank you for the commend and for reading 🥹💓
Is this part of a longer piece?
It's not, but it definitely could be made into a longer piece. Tempting!!! It's so uncommon to find writing in 2nd POV so I just made it short for experimenting >.>