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Jonathan Matei's avatar

This was such a great read! The tension between Carmen and Ally feels so real, and the way you build up their emotions makes every moment hit even harder.

I love how you captured the pull between desire and hesitation—it really adds depth to their relationship.

Do you think love is stronger when it’s filled with uncertainty, or does true love come with clarity?

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Ferni Escoto's avatar

Thank you so much!!! And that’s a great question. I honestly think there is something about what you can’t have. So it may seem stronger to not have clarity when in love, but is that really love or simply infatuation?

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Jonathan Matei's avatar

I think real love comes with clarity, but sometimes the lack of it makes emotions feel stronger.

When something feels out of reach, the desire for it can be mistaken for something deeper.

True love, though, isn’t just about intensity—it’s about security and knowing where you stand.

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Avery Bridge's avatar

I want Carmen to stand outside Ally's bedroom window with a boombox blasting "Good Luck, Babe!"

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Ferni Escoto's avatar

Omg I’m in love with this comment!!! No kidding hahaha

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Ferni Escoto's avatar

Thank you <3

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